The Renegade Count is up to 2,000 words after three or so days. That’s great progress, the plot has lots of energy, and the characters are coming to life. I’m really happy with it. But, I need to reassess.
The issue is that Yamaya is at the point of knifing Huld. The tension might build up to that by the end of the novella, but I’m only 4 pages in. This wasn’t meant to be my starting point. Besides which, my original intention was that Berisan make allies — first with Yamaya and later with the village where Huld lives. Having this level of antagonism at the outset will eliminate that possibility.
What’s happening, I think, is my fury at the attempted coup in Washington D.C. and the shameful non-apology from those who supported it. Real as the situation and emotions are, the story I’m writing needs to be separated from them.
Possibly, however, my muse is telling me that the novella is not really about Berisan making allies. It’s about Yamaya holding onto her farm. As I cool down that first conversation, more new ideas are already starting to pop.
So my job today is to step Huld back from his most inflammatory words, not trigger Yamaya’s rage, and let the plot build on a stronger framework.
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I can relate.
I remember just a few months ago seeing a list of common mistakes publishers/literary agents see from fantasy writers’ submissions. One of the top mistakes was an author starting a book with a battle. The problem is that the reader doesn’t know enough about the characters yet to care much, if at all, about who wins or loses.
I ran into a similar situation when what I had written as the second episode of a university-produced telenovela ended up being the pilot. I had started the episode with the funeral of the pivotal character who would have died in the originally-planned first episode. That character’s death was what brought many of the main characters together. The producer gave me similar advice to what I read above–starting with a funeral is boring because the audience doesn’t know or care about the dead character.
In any case, I hope things go really well with the book!
I like posts like this one. Looking behind the scenes helps us all step up our game.
Thanks!